Blog three; response to the blogs of another student

HI Jessica, my name is Carla i am student in professor Rogers-Cooper English 101 class. i like what you put down for your "Farm to Fridge" Summary, your main points or idea are very informative, but i feel that they're sort of shorts.You mention "how piglets are castrated" and their treatment,but i would have liked to to learn more about your views, for example, you could elaborate on your decision to side more with James Cromwell.i like how you put together the clip,book and the interviews(well organized.Moreover,it would have been nice if you use direct quotations to support your summary and main ideas.Lastly, you wouldn't change anything, but just add more about your own views.overall, i feel as though your blog has met the assignment requirement.best of luck for you.