Thursday, May 17, 2012

blog four- response to another student


Hi, my name is Carla and I am a student in professor Rogers Cooper English 101 class. Firstly, your blog is very informative in terms of food facts. In your first opening paragraph you mention all of the Dr Kessler’s claims, but you didn’t explain the quotes. Keep in mind that although you know all of his claims, the reader may not know them, so it is always good to just briefly explain each claims you are arguing or talking about it. Moreover, I would like to know more about your OWN point of views relating to Dr Kessler’ arguments. Furthermore, I lost you when you mention the “Cafo System” because you didn’t give an explanation or a topic sentence to support it. Why don’t you paraphrase Dr Kessler theory in connection to “Cafo System” and write your own views to it. Also I can see that you mostly wrote what Kessler said in the text. A blog is also writing about your own ideas and what you think or believe is right. Overall, I feel as though your blog has met the assignment requirement. Best of luck on your future blogs.

Monday, May 14, 2012

Martin Luther King and Stokely Carmichael's templates

In the 1960s and 1970s black leaders Martin Luther King and Stokely Carmichael cooperated to obtain the Afro Americans civil rights, king's leaned on the nonviolence philosophy while Carmichael agreed in the using of violence as a form of defense.king argued that nonviolence actions lead to no destruction and murders, instead it caused discipline, morality and courage among people.he celebrated the  fact that one's got to fight violence with love and dignity to be able to achieve a common purpose or goal. he was a man who wanted to fight in the most peaceful manner, full of compassion, love and mercy. by reading his nonviolence philosophy, concluded that one of his main message are to forgive others, change things and that we must work towards an understanding.furthermore, what a bloody and intense riots didn't produced, a passive and peaceful march did it( Civil Rights). on the other hand, Carmichael echoed were opposite from king's own prospective because he seems to be more concerned about using the force in a emotional intensity, without concerning about  morality or "special" feelings.

Malcom X

Malcolm X was an important historical figure who struggled to defend black people's rights and freedom.
 1964 was a year where many African Americans were fighting to be able to achieve the voting right. Malcolm x on his arguments about police brutality towards black argued that blacks always had lived with frustration, and on his the "bullet or the Ballot" speech argued about how white politicians deceived blacks with vain hopes and wishes.
Malcolm X in his "the bullet or the ballot" speech strongly argued that if the government keep depriving full human rights or equally towards blacks, it was the time for them to rebel against white politicians and their false commitment.furthermore, he emphasized that the government itself was the responsible for oppressing and depriving black Americans by not giving them their own natural and voting rights.
Malcolm X also argued on police brutality towards African Americans, he said that they were hardly brutalized and frightened by whites hand without any remorse and compassion towards blacks.